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See where your landing page loses people.

Answer four quick questions about your page and get an honest read on the handful of things that decide whether a visitor stays or leaves. About a minute, and nothing about your business is guessed. No email, no call, no signup.

This is a fast read on four things you can check from memory. If you want your whole page read and rewritten, that is the Page Kit, $97, back in 48 hours.

Runs in your browser. We only ask for an email if you want the result sent to you.

FIG 01

Tear down your page

Optional. Paste it so the kit can read the whole page when you order. The read below runs off your four answers, so you can do this with no live page at all.

How far down the page is what you actually do?

The offer, said plainly, so a stranger gets it fast.

Your headline mostly does what?

The first line a visitor reads, top of the page.

Before the button, which of these does your page answer?

Tick every one it covers. These are the questions a buyer asks in their head before they act.

Your main button says what?

The primary call to action a visitor is meant to take.

We read your four answers, not your live page. Nothing here is guessed about your business.
Your read

Here is what your four answers say.

Marked up from your four answers, not a screenshot of your live page yet.
A stronger hero, in shape

What a hero that holds people looks like

This is the shape, not your final words. The three lines below carry the weight on almost every page that converts. The kit writes them in your voice, from your live page.

Line 1The moment your customer is in, in their words.
Line 2What you do about it, plus the one thing they can check for themselves.
ButtonThe single action you want →

Read your answers back: the shape above is generic on purpose. Your kit fills each line with your offer, your customer, and your proof.

What four answers cannot see

Four answers cannot see your proof section, your process, the objections you leave hanging, or how the page reads top to bottom. The Page Kit reads all of it and rewrites the page in your voice, then hands you a blueprint and a preview you can look at.

Keep this read

Want it sent to you to sit on, or to forward to whoever owns the page? Drop an email and we will send this teardown across. That is the only time we ask for one.

Noted. The send endpoint is being wired, so this is not live yet.
Stub · send endpoint is a [Tom] wiring task
FIG 02 what a full teardown looks like

A page, torn down and rewritten.

Here is a teardown the pipeline produced start to finish, the same one you would get inside the kit. The business is made up, so nobody is on the spot. The writing is exactly the standard you would get back on your own page.

rivergumplumbing.com.au
Before · their live page
Welcome to Rivergum Plumbing. Quality service you can trust.

We are a family owned business providing plumbing solutions to the greater metro area for over 15 years. Our team of friendly professionals is committed to excellence. Contact us today for a free quote.

Submit an enquiry generic headline · no clear next step
rivergumplumbing.com.au
After · the Page Kit
Burst pipe or blocked drain, and a licensed plumber at your door today, or the call-out is free.

Rivergum handles emergency and booked-in plumbing across the northern suburbs. Fixed quote before we start, a text when we are on the way, and the same crew every time.

Book a plumber → names the moment · one clear action

Note 01

The old headline talks about the company. The new one names the moment the customer is in, a burst pipe, and what happens next.

Note 02

“Quality you can trust” is what every trade says. A fixed quote before work starts is something a customer can actually check.

Note 03

One clear action, book a plumber, in place of a vague “submit an enquiry” that asks the visitor to do the work.

Synthetic example · real pipeline output